Sunday, March 28, 2010

Publication For All (I Wish!)

Good evening, readers! Today's word of the week, forte is brought to you by Penelope Paige. Someone's forte is his or her strong point. In Italian, forte actually means "strong," so it makes sense (and you pronounce the word the same way in both languages). When the English borrowed the word from the French in the 1700s, it referred to the sharpest/stronger part of the sword's blade in fencing.

Next week I have a very fun post for you on writing horror stories with newly obtained information I received today and yesterday at the I-Con convention, a place where geeks all over the nation gather to discuss awesome things. I'm sorry to say that this week's post will be shorter and less awesome than usual, but I just got home from the 3-day I-Con convention and I'm tired. But next week's post will be awesome, pinky promise (that is, if my parents allowed me online on Easter). Anyway, on to the topic.

Networking! This is something that I also learned a lot about at I-Con. One of the YA authors, Sarah Beth Durst (writer of many fantasy novels, the newest one being "Ice"), spoke to me today about getting connections. There are are many exceptional authors that never get published, and if they do, never get recognized because they don't know the right people. Their work can be sitting at the bottom of the query pile because they don't have the priority. She said that although writing takes skill, getting published is mostly related to luck and knowing someone in the business. The Quill, for example, is a way to network and branch out and I predict it will be a great resource once it really sets off.

However, you can get lucky like Durst did. She went the traditional route to publication: sending out queries to publishers until one of them finally picked her story up. Now she has multiple books out on the market! Luck and networking is the key to publication. Go to different message boards, talk to people at conventions.

One final warning: If a publisher wants YOU to pay THEM, it's a scam. Durst told me that they're just trying to take money from you. The publisher makes money when your book sells, so they'll pay YOU to publish your novel.

Durst also mentioned that it's extremely difficult to live on just your writing, since you don't get that much per book and not many authors have merchandise or anything. Unless you're J.K. Rowling, don't quit your day job.

That's all for tonight, writers! I'm exhausted, but I hope you enjoyed today's post. If you have any questions or comments, feel free to email me at penelopepaige@rocketmail.com. Time to go sharpen that pencil...

Question: Have you ever been published? Do you have any methods of networking?

Sunday, March 21, 2010

“The first draft reveals the art, revision reveals the artist” - Michael Lee

Good morning, writers! Penelope here, writing to get you out of bed on this beautiful Sunday morning! Before we get started, this week's word is glower., which basically means "a stare of anger or annoyance." It looks like it would sound like "glow-er" but it really has the vowel sound of "cow." Back in the Middle Ages, it uses to mean "a look of astonishment or amazement" but in the late 1700s, it started using today's meaning concerning anger.

I know when you all saw the title of today's post, you groaned. The truth is, almost all of us hate revisions, but in reality, revisions is what honestly makes the novel. I've been doing revisions on my story lately and I've almost completely changed a character's personality and interactions with one of my major characters. It's not like it's a random change; my minor character has just been misunderstood and I finally see the true side of him after reading over my story. I'm even considering changing the ending after this discovery, as his personality is finally seen fully by the reader at the end. Revisions, although time constraining, really make your novel the best it can be. If we all sent our first drafts to be queried, none of us would ever get published.

So the next time you look at the word "revisions," don't stick your tongue out in disgust. Just nod, because you'll know that although, to me, one of the hardest parts of writing a novel, it's the most rewarding.

That's all for today, writers! Have a good day! If you have any questions or comments, feel free to email me at penelopepaige@rocketmail.com. Time to go sharpen that pencil...

Question: How do you feel about revisions?

Sunday, March 14, 2010

I Give This Blog Five Stars!

Well, I would, but my opinion doesn't matter much. But anyway, I'm here to explain this fine afternoon about the art of critiquing others' writing. But first, let's start with the word of the week. This week's word is ominous, an adjective that foreshadows evil and often shows an omen. Back in the day, "ominous" didn't always mean "foreshadowing evil." Its original meaning was "presaging events to come" -- whether good or bad. Okay, onto the post!

A lot of authors who want to publish a novel, or even a small piece of poetry, often get their work critiqued first before sending it to someone in the business. For example, I have a beta working on my current novel right now. She tells me when a sentence sounds awkward or when one of my characters acts in an odd manner. She's awesome. That's what a good critic should do: tell you when something needs work.

If you want to critique someone, here are a few tips:

~Be honest, yet still polite: If something sucks, say so. If my character was turning into a Mary-Sue, I would want my beta to tell me. However, she's always kind with her tips, and sometimes she even makes me laugh. Don't make someone feel like a loser if they make a mistake; it's your job to help them correct the mistake, not mock them,

~Give critiques you wish you would receive: It's back to that "do unto others" theory. If you wish your last beta had told you about how 2-D your characters were, analyze the characters in the story you're critiquing. If you wished you had a thorough description of what the last person thought of your story, give the writer exactly what you thought of their work. Chances are, if you want it, they will want the same. Plus, no one wants harsh, rude criticism, but they want helpful criticism.

~Being a critic actually helps YOU too!: Believe it or not, giving someone else criticism means you know what to look out for in your own work. If you see someone has an underdeveloped plotline, you'll be more aware of your own plot.

But sometimes, getting criticism can be a little tough. Like when Katze, another member considered me taking a few pages out of the beginning to skip to the action, I had been really against it since I worked hard on perfecting the beginning. However, I've been thinking and thinking about it more and more and I think I want to follow her advice. One main thing you have to do when taking criticism is take emotion out of the picture. I didn't want to keep those pages because they were any better than the rest, I just wanted to keep them because I had worked so hard on them and was annoyed that my work was "going to waste." However, I realize that I could still recycle those pages and use them as flashbacks and other useful things. Plus, I learned a lot about my main characters in those pages. No writing is ever wasted.

But, one little thing that always bugs me: say thank you. The beta/critic is taking a lot of time out of his or her busy schedule to help you. They're doing you a favor, just say that you appreciate their time and energy put forth into making your story better. If they did a good job, maybe you'll even want to help them with their work in return.

Make sure to know what you're looking for before the beta starts. If you have something specific you want the beta to look at, like poor description or awkward dialogue, say so. Otherwise, the beta might just pay attention to the work as a whole. It helps you and the beta, so be specific when possible.

That's all for today, writers! Have a good day! If you have any questions or comments, feel free to email me at penelopepaige@rocketmail.com. Time to go sharpen that pencil...

Question: Have you ever critiqued someone's work? What was it like for you?

Sunday, March 7, 2010

"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing." - Benjamin Franklin

Good afternoon, readers! Before I start off on today's topic, I would like to mention that this word of the week is suborn, a verb meaning to induce, persuade, or influence someone secretly to do an unlawful thing. It's often used in sentences about law, like someone being persuaded to committ perjury (that person is being suborned to committ perjury). It comes from a Latin word, ""subornare," which translates to "to secretly furnish or equip." There, wasn't that fun?

So today's topic is chapter titles. You know, those things before a chapter that nobody reads? It's a shame really, but many readers either ignore them because they're boring or just don't notice them at all. However, I love chapter titles. I think that they're fun, insightful ways to see what the upcoming chapter is going to be about. I've seen them done many different ways. Some are long (ex. chapters in the point of view of Jacob Black in Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer), some are short ( like in the Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling) Some have only numbers. Some novels don't have chapters at all, but mainly asteriks separating the main scenes (The Devil Wears Prada by Lauren Weisberger). I've seen novels that only use the name of the character of the point of view it's in (ex. in Nick and Norah's Infinite Playlist by Rachel Cohn and David Levithan, the chapters simply alternated by "1. Nick" and "2. Norah" and "3. Nick" etc.) However, creative chapter titles is a good way to keep your reader interested. After all, when you spot a captivating chapter title, it makes you want to keep reading. They can get a piblisher interested as well.

Every author does chapters differently, and many novels by a single author can have different styles of chapter titles. But the one main things that many of them (if not all) have in common is that they all relate to a main idea in the chapter. Some of them are broad, one word titles, and some are more specific, but they both relate to important aspects of the chapter.

Here are some hints that I've used or tried out in past chapters:

1. Reptition - Beginning each chapter with the same two words in a pattern can keep chapters entertaining. For example, you can have a novel with each chapter beginning with "Don't Forget to..." and then end with different words each time. It can keep things interesting.

2. Alitteration - Having alliteration in your chapters keeps your chapters flowing nicely, plus keeps them short and sweet. For example, one chapter can be "Daring Diasater" and another can be "Always Arrogant."

3. Clever and Humorous - Witty titles are a great way to catch a reader's attention, especially if it seems to be in the point of view of a witty character in the novel. For example, "How Not to Get Your Way" or "Don't Talk Back to Guys with Big Muscles." Keep it interesting.

4. Poems, Quotes or Song Lyrics - Having a brief quote or song lyric before a chapter is a great way of hinting what's going to happen in the chapter. You're welcome to use common or unrecognizable song titles as a chapter title (ex. Broken) but if you used a song title such as "Boulevarde of Broken Dreams," you might not be able to get away with that if the novel is published. You could also use a small portion of the quote as a title and include the full quote above.

5. Definition - Sometimes using definitions of words as a chapter titles can really work, depending on the story at hand. Or you could do something like, "Love: A 4-letter word that's impossible to define." Play around with it.

6. Language - I've seen novels where all the chapter titles are in a different language. Many of the words you can tell the meaning of in English, simply by how they look and sound, but it just keeps things a little spicy and special.

Remember: you don't have to be consistent! Sometimes changing things up can keep your reader (and you) entertained! Don't be afraid to mix things up!

The best advice I can give you is pay attention to what your story's about, the simple and the abstract things. For example, in Laurie Halse Anderson's Speak, she could have titled each chapter with something that the main character wanted to say, but couldn't because she was too scared. The best chapter titles really relate to the story. You know your story better than anyone else; use that power to your advantage.

That's all for today, writers! Have a good night! If you have any questions or comments, feel free to email me at penelopepaige@rocketmail.com. Time to go sharpen that pencil...

Question: Do you have a specific way to name your chapters? If so, what is it? If not, how do you name your chapters? Do you name them at all?

Sunday, February 28, 2010

What's Your Name Again?

Good evening, reader! It's Moon. Today's topic is going to be on naming your characters, but first let me start with the weekly Word of the Day (which I guess should be the "Word of the Week," huh?) This one is thaumaturgy, which is a noun referring to the performance of miracles, usually magic. (This makes me think of Harry Potter, tee hee. <3) It comes from a Greek word meaning "miracle working." There's also "thaumaturge" and "thaumaturgist," (nouns, meaning a both of which mean "a performer of miracles" or "a magician," ) and the adjective "thaumaturgic," (meaning "performing miracles" or "of, relating to, or dependent on thaumaturgy." Like most writers I know, I always want my characters to be detailed and 3-D. Sometimes I went on a baby naming site and looked up meanings to certain names. Though, then I realized that people in real life usually don't match their name, and that it's more important to be time-appropriate than personality-appropriate. After all, the parents didn't know what you would be like when they had you. I mean, "Penelope" is Greek and means "With a web over her face." That means nothing to me. Here are the main things to keep in mind when naming your characters (keep in mind that I embarrassed myself by breaking all of these to help share with you what I've learned):



1. Cultural and story context: A name usually reflects the culture and life of the character, sometimes the genre of the book as well. Aeon Daggercult would be great for a fantasy novel, but not for realistic fiction. People in the 1800s named their kids Martha and Hulda, but you wouldn't see someone with those names in present day. If a character has a Native American background that goes to a high school in New Jersey, his name won't be "Misty Rain" or "Big Bear." They've assimilated. His name might be John. His last name could be an Americanized last name too, but it could also be something from his culture.

* Just a quick note: If you're naming your character from another culture, be sure to do your research. Just because a name sounds like fun doesn't mean you should just name your character that off the bat. Look it up. It could be a boy's name instead of a girl's name. It could mean something completely offensive (You wouldn't name your kid Ass would you?) and the character wouldn't be taken seriously in his culture.

2. Keep the names to a minimum: I know some people have two middle names or five names, but just leave your characters alone. Even if you have a fantasy novel, your reader will just get confused or overwhelmed or just not take the character seriously if her name is "Misty Jessica Clefairy Winefred Humbleton." Not gonna happen. Keep it to two or three names, unless you really feel it's necessary to expand. And keep nicknames to a minimum too: you don't want to confuse your reader. If your character's name is Joseph, keep it to Joe or Joey (but if you have a more creative nickname, use that one, but don't use ALL of them).

3. Avoid stereotypes: This one should be obvious, guys. Seriously. If you have a story based around stellar, celestial things, please don't name your character Luna Moon. Please, I beg of you. You'll get laughed at. I, personally, will laugh at you. You don't want that; I have a very loud, obnoxious laugh.

4. Keep pronunciation in mind: So you don't want a bland name, that's fine. We all want names that our readers will remember and associate with our characters. However, out of desperation, don't name your character Fwejfoievnujsri, because even though that LOOKS awesome on the page of your fantasy/sci-fi novel, your reader will rip out the page in their anger and damn their tongues for all eternity.

5. Don't freak out: In all seriousness, a name is a name. If your character has an awesome, perfect name and a terrible, 2-D personality, you're character will still be unsatisfactory. Name, although important, shouldn't be at the top of your list. Work on learning about your character. You may even change his or her name after getting to know the character more. You can even refer to the character as "Girl" or "Boy" or "Awesome Guy" until you find a name you like. It's not the biggest deal in the world.

That's all for today, guys! Have a good night! If you have any questions or comments, feel free to email me at penelopepaige@rocketmail.com. Time to go sharpen that pencil...

Question: How do you go about naming your characters?

Monday, February 22, 2010

Blog Award!

Good evening, followers! I bet you're wondering, What brings this weekly blogger to posting on a Monday? Well I'm glad you asked! Today is a very fun day, because in this post I'm announcing that Intent Forgotten is the winner of a blog award!

I was given the "Creative Writer" Blogger award by a fellow friend and writer, Jenna! Thanks so much! She is the admin of the Quill and Ink Forum that I moderate. Be sure to check it out!

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Here are the rules of the Creative Writer Blogger Award

Nominate SEVEN “Creative Writers”
Post links to the SEVEN blogs you nominate.
Leave a comment on said SEVEN blogs to let them know they’ve been nominated.

So here are my outrageous statements! If you pick which one's the truth, you'll be my seventh nominee! Just post which answer you think it is here!

1. I sometimes pass out in the shower due to exhaustion and illness.
2. I hate sharing my school/art supplies. A pencil doesn't cost that much, but I don't let people borrow any of my supplies because I know I'll never get it back.
3. One time, since I kept tripping on ice, I waddled and slid on my stomach across the ice on my driveway, making it safely to school that morning.
4. I hate wearing shoes, so I usually just don't wear them.
5. I'm blue-purple colorblind officially, but I have more trouble with red and green.
6. I have three homemade tattoos. And they're awesome.
7. I've traveled all over the U.S. I've lived in more places than I can count.

Try to figure me out! Just comment on what you think the truth is and I'll make you the seventh nominee if you guess correctly first! I'll edit this post when someone gets the truth right.

And here are the nominees:
1. Hadhafang of Nodes of Ranvier
2. Emily Cross of The Chronicles of Emily Cross
3. Silent Midnight of Close Your Eyes; You're Entering the World of Words
4. Anne R. Allen of Anne R. Allen's Blog.
5. Kori of Author In Progress
6. Jess G of Snippets
7. The lucky person to guess my outrageous truth!

That's all for today (I can't spoil you guys)! Be sure to come back next Sunday for more writing goodies!

Sunday, February 21, 2010

"Girls Do What They Want, Boys Do What They Can!"

Good afternoon, fellow writers! Just to let you know, the title is a lyric from the song "Girls Do What They Want" by the Maine. Good song.

Before we move on to today's topic, let's begin with the word of the day. This week's is evanescent. I used to love the band, Evanescence, and I finally understand what their name means! Evanescent is an adjective meaning to vanish like vapor. It comes from the Latin verb "evanescere," which means "to evaporate" or "to vanish." Exciting, isn't it?

This week's topic is, not the writers, but the readers. I was reading something online awhile back about boys' and girls' preferences on what they want in a novel, the ages ranging around middle grade and early high school.

Here are a few interesting points I've discovered:

- Girls are more active readers than boys
- Girls prefer to read about girl protagonists (but will read about boy protagonists), but boys usually stick to strictly boy protagonists
- Both boys and girls want a character to root for and relate to, yet boys look for sarcastic characters with a sense of humor, while girls prefer a smart, reliable protagonist.
- Girls want a character who has to surpass real life problems, like tough decisions and friendship, but boys want a competitive, funny outlook for their character.
- Girls seem to enjoy stories with more emotional depth and creative solutions to problems, while boys prefer a clear-cut good vs. evil plot. Boys prefer an action-adventure novel, while girls prefer novels relating to real life.

Boys and girls, for the most part, have very different genres and storyline they like to read, so writing for both genders can be difficult. If you want to try to write a unisex novel, try:

- Creating characters they can relate to (ex. a similar age, similar challenges and issues for that age)
- A unique storyline (but whether it's fantasy or realistic fiction, still include experiences the reader can relate to. An adrenaline rush can be achieved by defeating the dragon or doing well in a high school recital.)
- It's easier to get a girl to read about a boy protagonist, but if you really want a girl protagonist for both genders, the girl has to be adventurous and have strong, realistic goals that a boy or girl could have. (A boy best friend can help, too).

That's all for today, faithful readers! If you have any questions or comments, feel free to email me at penelopepaige@rocketmail.com. Time to go sharpen that pencil...

Question: What do you think about writing novels for both genders? Have you ever done it before? Or do you believe that most novels are easily fit for both boys and girls?

Check back tomorrow (Monday? A post? I know!) for a fun announcement. I'll give you a hint: It includes this blog, me, and a shiny award ;)